Feedback Unit 3 - Childhood Group 2

For this Blog review, I chose the Childhood category and, therefore, the submission from Group 2. I was particularly struck by the early inclusion of adverse childhood experiences (ACEs), which I was able to explore previously during the Interprofessional Approaches to Regional and Global Population Health Course. The infographics grabbed my attention; several supported the female-centric aspects of ACEs' impact. Your writing was succinct and well supported by the literature reviewed. As an occupational therapist (OT), I enjoyed the inclusion of OT-related references in the body of the text, as this made your submission more relatable for me.

All elements of psychosocial, social, and emotional factors and the implications of the subject concerning the interplay between these factors were covered. Emotional regulation is a current "big topic” and was nicely explained.

I would be interested in comparison statistics to clarify the specifics of how ACEs affect female children more than males. A little more focus on visuals that focused on female children could help me understand the specific challenges of said demographic. However, I appreciated the brevity of the videos, as one can get overwhelmed by more lengthy examples. As well, consistency of text alignment might help, as this was a little erratic. Otherwise, the language, punctuation, and cohesiveness of written expression were well done. Thank you.